Pitch: Initial Feedback from Class

1. Do you think our idea links to the folk genre? If no, then why?

The class thought that our idea was a suitable link to the folk genre because it had an alternative concept.

2. How suitable is our target audience?

They thought that our target audience would be suitable for the 25-30 age range, rather than a teenage range of around 17-22. However, they did say that the alternative genre could appeal to some younger audience's - so perhaps don't make the video completely for the older age range. Add in some features that may attract a few people from the younger age range. 

3. Do you have any more ideas of how we could represent the loss os someone through our video?

The class suggested that we show the daughter with the Dad through the use of flashbacks. They said that if we were to just show the Dad, the audience may become confused over the concept idea. The flashbacks could be happy memories of when they were together. 

4. Can you think of any more local locations that we could use?

Clee Hill was suggested to be used for another location. The location connotes realism but also will help to establish the isolation of the Dad in our video.

5. What percentage of the video should be performative/narrative based?

It was suggested that our narrative base should be the higher percentage due to the concept and the story we want to tell. Some of the people said that we would need more narrative base to make sure that our concept came across clearly; otherwise, the audience may not understand the narrative to our concept. We would need to include some performative base as this is a common theme within our genre.