Editing Update

We have made a rough cut on our music video; however, there are some areas that we need to improve on:

Narrative:

• The new footage we filmed of the girl needs to be stretched to fill the full screen, we will be researching tutorials to learn how to do that.
• We need a shot of the 'Father' and 'Daughter' holding hands in order to make the link clearer to the audience. Our group decided that the storyline and the link between the two people are a bit too vague; therefore, it needs to be established more. We thought about filming the two of them holding hands at the end and walking away in order to show that they have found one another.

Performance:

• We need to make our performance clips shorter as we need to follow the media conventions of music videos...due to the genre of our music video, we have decided to aim for 30fpm.
• On Monday we are re filming some of our performance as we need more close ups of the performance and more shots of the performer lip syncing to the music.