Rough Cut of Narrative Footage

So far we have managed to create a rough cut for our narrative section. We have removed the performance footage as we are re-filming it tonight; we decided we needed more close up shots of the performer and a clearer vision of the lip syncing. We have now managed to stretch some of our footage that were surrounded by black borders, however, we would like some opinions on whether the story of our narrative is clear. We are anxious as to whether we have conveyed it clearly to the audience, therefore, we have created some questions that will hopefully gain us useful feedback.