Tuesday, 3 December 2013

Video Feedback for Rough Cut




Focus Group Feedback 1 



Feedback 2 









The overall feedback for the rough cut was positive. The feedback we got for the narrative was good as they said it was clear; however, they did say that it was made better by the ending shot of them coming together, which established the connection clearly. Also the genre was clear for the audience as Kirsty said that due to the mise-en-scene, it appeared very realistic and simplistic and is therefore a generic convention. However, an improvement that we need to work on is the lip synching as it isn't clear in some places what he is exactly singing. Therefore, I think we need to re film the last 30 seconds of the artist lip synching in order to boost the quality.

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